I am looking to get some constructive criticism on the opening chapters of Tirfo Thuin. You can access this here: http://bit.ly/q4r2cv
You are able to offer free will reviews on the site but I think you will need to sign up to YouWriteOn so if anyone would like to offer any comments feel free to add them to this post.
Thanks and I look forward to hearing people’s thoughts on this, good or bad. I would also be interested to know if this is the kind of book you would usually read as it is good to get varied reviews.